At sixteen years of age, Natalie couldn’t help but constantly
dream about other places and times. Her own life boiled over with so many
horrors that any other place would be better. Natalie and her sister, Jenny, lived
with their mother, Felicity in a two-story house left to her in her father’s
will. Society had progressed, or so the schools taught it, to the point where
women were not allowed to own property unless married or living within their
father’s means.
“Slavery,” Natalie called it. When she was younger, she read
about the same treatment of other nationalities. Now that all the countries had
become a single power, Felicity explained, they needed a unifying enemy. Enough
of the countries already considered women inferior; it was a small step for the
rest to agree. There had been uprisings at first, but military law was soon
established to enforce the decrees. The man Natalie had once called father was
among those who established the decree, and she hated him for it. Due to an
allowance in the law for women who already owned property, Felicity retained
rights to the property her father had given her, but it could never pass on to
her children.
Natalie and Jenny spent hours every day digging a tunnel with
their mother in a trench near the house. Felicity explained that they would one
day need it to escape when she was dead. Despite protests to her death, they
dug every day for three years with few exceptions. When the tunnel was finished
with numerous shelters and stashes of food and supplies hidden, the girls
rested.
For a month or two, everything seemed to return to normal for
the girls, aside from the exercises their mother made them do every day.
Natalie sat and read as often as she was allowed, and Jenny went to discussing
the state of the world with their mother. Neither of the girls ventured far
outside the property as their mother did since neither of them had bands that
showed their birthright, and neither of them ever could. From inside the yard,
everything seemed quiet and simple, and the problems of the world seemed
distant.
One day, their mother came home frightened and started giving
orders to the girls. None of them would sleep that night until their bags were
packed and each of them had heard Felicity’s commands for the coming weeks.
When their mother spoke with such authority, neither girl dared argue or speak
until asked to. Felicity gave each of them chores and duties based upon their
strengths.
Natalie had always been more adventurous than her sister who
carefully considered every action before doing it. As the eldest, Jenny was
given her mother’s pendant and told specifically to care for it. Her mother
said it was a gift from her great, great grandfather who came upon it
mysteriously. It was the only sign of their lineage and supposedly a gift from
another world, though she didn’t believe that. Jenny was told to make sure
everything was packed and ready to go at any time should anything happen.
Natalie was told to not let Jenny wait or go back for anything. The moment they
sensed trouble or anything happened to their mother, both girls were to leave
and make for the tunnels and collapse the entrance. Their mother promised to
meet them at the far exit from the tunnel several miles away in the woods if
she could.
Two days later, Felicity went to the store and never
returned.
3 comments:
Man Thor I'm excited about your book! I have a bunch of questions I can't wait to get an answer on. Why don't they have birthright bands? Who are these people that are oppressing them? Where is the dad? What year is it? The past, the future?
By the way is your name really Thor?
Wow, those are really great questions. I'm glad you like the book so far, even though this may not end up being part of it... I'm sorry I didn't explain better about the birthright. It made more sense in my mind than it does now that I'm coming back to read it. I will try to edit this once I get the first chapter written so it will make more sense.
Basically, the birthright bands show that a woman owned property before the law that women can't own property came into effect. She is allowed to retain her property, but she can only pass it onto a husband or male heir since women can't own property anymore in this setting. Does that make sense?
As to where their dad is, I don't want to give too much away. You'll see more in Chapter 1. Suffice to say, he's a military official.
When I started this story, I thought it would be an entirely different world, but the more I write, the more it seems like it could be a future earth. I hope it isn't, but who knows. At this point, I don't know what planet or time it is. Let's say future ^_^
And yes, my name really is Thor. I get asked that question a lot. My dad is a historian and prefers Norse History and Mythology to any other. As he tells the story, he wanted to name me Mjölnir (since I was, as his son, his greatest weapon), but my mom refused him, so they settled on Thor.
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