“This
may yet be upon you sooner than you think, Natalie Dumar. Your time is coming,”
a familiar voice whispered in her ear.
Natalie
woke up drenched in sweat. Her hands shook with fright until she realized that
she had again been dreaming. For the last three nights, Natalie endured the
same vision; some nights she even enjoyed it. Each night, she was taken to a
wonderful place. Creatures she had only heard of in fairy tales occupied the
world she entered in her dreams. The land was inundated with adventure and
contained a mystical feel to it.
Each of the three
nights, Natalie did something different while she was in this world, but the
dream always brought her to the same place, and she never remembered how. Every
time, she stood on the same mountain with that man lying next to her. Who is he anyway? Natalie wondered. The
man wore plain clothes and his face lay in the dirt. For all she knew, she was
protecting a poor beggar from his impending doom; she and her bow were the only
force that stood between the man and eternity. That possibility never stopped
Natalie from hoping he was handsome and might fall in love with her.
The
irony of the situation was laughable. I
hate even running. You couldn’t pay me to work out like I’d need to if I was
going to fight in a battle. Natalie chuckled to herself. She doubted if she
would even be able to figure out how a bow worked. Even more laughable than
that was the small effect an arrow could even have on a beast of that size.
Natalie’s smile turned to a shudder when she thought of the rage in the eyes
that faced her each night. Almost seems
as though his hate could kill me.
As
she thought about the monster, Natalie began to fear that her sister had been
killed. The same, unsettling feeling pervaded her thoughts last night as well.
Her older sister scolded her then and told her to go back to bed; tonight,
again, Natalie felt weighed down by the feeling of death coming from her sister's
room. Ever since their mom died, Jessica and Natalie had struggled to survive
with only each other to lean on. Their only memento of their mother was the
necklace she gave them. Try as she might, the urge finally overcame Natalie;
she ran to her sister's room.
“Jessica!”
Tears forming in her eyes, Natalie shook her sister awake.
“What
is it?” Jessica, trying to regain consciousness, grumbled. The anxiety in
Natalie's voice mixed with the tears in her eyes jerked Jessica to a fully
alert state. “Have they come?! Hurry! We'll take the hidden path behind the–”
“No.
. .” Natalie solemnly stopped her sister. “I. . . I just wanted to make sure
you were all right. I was... well, I woke up... “ Natalie's attempt to
forestall her sister's anger accomplished, for her, the opposite effect.
“You
were dreaming again?” Jessica asked angrily. “I told you not to wake me up
unless it was important. Now go to bed.” Jessica rolled over and pulled the
covers back to her neck.
Natalie
nodded and studied the face of her sister before walking out of the room and
down the short hallway to her own. The thought of losing her only sister, even
if it was only a dream, left Natalie trembling. Natalie was so lost in her
thoughts that she didn't hear the raining of blows upon the front door at the
bottom of the stairs for several seconds. Natalie looked and saw flashlights
shining through the windows of the downstairs living room. She turned to run
back to her sister's room, but Jessica was already standing behind her.
“Get
your things and meet me in my room.” Jessica quietly blurted the orders.
Each
girl ran to her room and grabbed an already packed, lightweight sack of food
and clothes that was prepared for just this occasion. Natalie looked around her
room one last time. This place had been her comfort and protection for the last
five years, and now she would be forcibly removed from it, one way or another.
The misty blue walls gained life by the posters that she had hung everywhere. A
small dresser stood in the far corner of the room. Their dad never cared much
for them, and once he left, their mother couldn't afford much. Natalie joined
Jessica in her room to see that she had already removed a wall panel near the
floor in the corner of the moonlit room. Natalie made a mental image of this
room as well: the auburn carpet and walls which were white, save the far wall
which was grayed from the fire that had burnt in an electrical surge near her
desk. The likelihood of her ever returning to the scene of so many memories died
when she heard the downstairs door begin to crack. A tear fell from her cheek.
Jessica motioned for her sister to get in the opening in the wall. Jessica,
pulling the panel shut behind them, followed her.
Natalie’s
often-quick tongue stuck to the roof of her mouth. She looked around, into the
dark shaft. After a few minutes, her eyes adapted to the darkness. They both
sat on a ledge behind the wall of the room. Below them was a long, sloping
corridor that she knew led to another fake wall on the ground floor, outside of
the house. Scuffling feet entered the room. The following minutes produced
crashes either of glass or something heavy against one of the walls. Natalie
nearly yelped when something hit the wall where they were hiding. Heavy boots
entered the room.
“I
can't find it, Sir.” a male voice spoke near the panel the girls hid behind.
“It
is either here or with those brats, soldier. My wife would not have let
anything happen to it. I doubt the girls even know how to use it. Where are
they anyway?” The angry voice, which boomed through the panel, was the man Natalie
once called “father”. When his voice fell upon her ears, fear swelled to
encompass her mind until she could hear nothing but the pounding of blood in
her head. Two arms gently wrapped up the hurting child. It was a moment before
Natalie realized it was her sister and not mother that held her.
“I
have no care for what you think you are capable of.” Their father growled. “I
want them found! I don't care if they are dead or alive, just get me that
jewel.” The man stormed out of the room. A rush of footsteps followed.
Natalie
and Jessica began to descend along the sloping corridor. The passage was dark,
but the panels let in enough light to allow the girl’s eyes to see where they
were going. It was raining outside. Natalie often felt the water beneath her
hands and knees.
Natalie’s
fear wasn’t without justification. Her father was the provincial governor; he
was a tyrant in the most absolute sense of the word. Jessica and Natlie’s
parents were married fifteen years, eight of which their father spent as a
provincial governor. Until her eleventh birthday, Natalie saw him as a caring
father. Without warning he began tormenting his wife, first vocally and
eventually with brute force. He refused to allow either her or their children
more food than was needed to stay alive. He was re-elected a year later and began
to make almost obscene laws under the guise of helping the province that he
lived in. During this time, he eliminated poverty in a controversial way.
Anyone who was homeless (for a female this meant not married to a man with a
house) became an illegal citizen and subject to execution on sight. However, despite
the silence on the subject, most knew that women were often taken and sexually
abused; the boys were either beaten to death or used for brutal games.
Soon
after his reelection, Natalie heard an argument between her mother and father
about a pendant. That night, her father left on what he called “business”.
Natalie's mom gave the pendant to Jessica who now wore it in a little pouch
beneath her shirt. The pendant was no more than a silver eagle with garnet
stones for eyes. Neither girl understood the importance of it, but their
mother's last wish was that no one ever gain possession of it, save them. To
the girls it was not something to be fought over; it was their only remnant of
their mother. The years following their father’s departure, Natalie and Jessica
helped their mother build this escape route which exited toward a long tunnel
they dug north of the house. It
contained enough food supplies to last several months; each batch lay in
differing locations along the eight-mile hole.
He was never able to take the
pendant from mother because it belonged to her. Natalie
thought with not a little anger. Everybody
called it an accident that mom was mugged and killed on the way home. How
perfect that it would happen the same week he disinherited Jessica and I.
Natalie's blood began to boil at the thought of the man now searching for them.
He was never much of a father to begin with, and because of him, they’d have to
wait in this dark and damp room until night fell before they could move to the
underground passage across the arroyo.
“Quiet,”
Jessica hissed. Natalie realized she was breathing hard and forced her
breathing to calm.
Hesitant
footsteps began down the stairs, not far from their hiding location on the
bottom floor. A snarl from the governor rang in their ears; the sound came from
some place near the shaft they sat in. Natalie held her breath instinctively.
“Where
is my pendant?”
“Governor
Jorrigan, it isn’t here. The girls must have it, but they can’t be far. The
beds are still warm from their body heat.” The soldier’s voice, though direct,
quavered as he answered. Royce Jorrigan’s governorship was no longer a simple
position. He had, by all rights, become king of the province.
“Did
the girls sneak past your men, commander?” their father growled.
“That’s
impossible, sir. They’re only children, and our men are professionals: the best
of the best.”
“Then
tell me, commander of the best of the best, where are they?” The governor’s
voice bellowed. Natalie imagined the person he called commander standing there and
attempting to hold back his anger and fear like she used to.
“Logic
dictates in the house, perhaps some kind of hidden room or something. We’ve
found three hidden rooms already, but they were empty. We’ll begin to tear down
the walls at your order, Sir.”
“No
need, commander. Burn down the house. That medallion is a precious metal, the
whole house and anything in it will lay in ashed before that pendant starts to
even bubble from heat. Don’t you agree that the ashes will be easier to search?”
“Sir…
do you—”
“Be
careful, Soldier,” Royce ordered unwaveringly. “If you question me, it may be
the last thing you do as a commander.”
“Yes,
Sir. I’ll evacuate the premises immediately.”
Natalie
and Jessica grasped one another’s hands in silent horror at the thought of the fire
consuming them. The shouting of voices and the rushing of feet gave the sisters
the distraction they needed.
“Follow
me, quickly.” Jessica said in a hushed voice. She deftly slid the panel in
front of them to the side to reveal the glaring sun in their eyes. Both girls
squinted at the contrast to the darknessthe sun gave. They did not have the
time to adjust, however; while cursing the risen sun’s unforgiving rays, they
ran as soon as the patrolling guard was out of sight.
Had
it been night, the girls may have survived, but as they were running into the
arroyo, another guard came around the corner and spotted their sinking heads.
“Stop!” the soldier called. Shout upon shout followed. Natalie’s ears didn’t
concern her, only the yearning in her legs to move faster and in her heart not
to die.
Jessica
was first to reach the cavern in the side of the arroyo. She reached in and
immediately found what she was looking for. The silver peacemaker in her hand
flashed to eye level then a bullet came flying out of the barrel toward the
first head to show over the edge of the arroyo as Natalie made her way into the
cavern. The soldier tumbled into the arroyo, landing on his neck. Neither girl
waited to see if he was dead or not; they were in the cavern and crawling as
fast as they could.
Had
Jessica paused for a moment, she might have screamed at the thought of killing
someone. Their mother made sure they knew how to use an array of weapons, but
killing someone had never been on their list of goals. In this moment, however,
Jessica could think of nothing more than her sister’s safety. Adrenaline and
desire won out over morals for the moment.
The
girls knew it wasn’t over yet, for shouts, coming from the other side of the
arroyo, sounded behind them. It wasn’t long before a volley of shots was heard
from an automatic gun at the entrance of the tunnel. The girls dropped into a
belly-crawl, thankful for the daily exercises their mother made them promise to
do. Why hadn’t we moved out of the house
like mother suggested before she died? Natalie questioned with great intensity.
Natalie
quivered as a rush of wind passed her ear before a bullet lodged in the rock
next to her. The thought of screaming seemed so appealing, but her mouth
wouldn’t open. Her senses were overwhelmed and her vision faded into a clear
white.
2 comments:
how do you choose character names? do they have significance for you? also, do you base your characters on anyone you know in real life?
rachfortheskyyy:
My character names are often random.For example, Natalie is a name that I have liked for a long time, and Dumar (Natalie's last name) comes from changing the last letter of Dumas -I happened to see a copy of "The Count of Monte Cristo" when I was coming up with ideas.
You were right when you asked if I write about people I know. The way I came up with a name for one of my main characters is in relationship to who I based that character on. My best friend growing up played an online game with me called "Dark Age of Camelot." I based a lot of the character after my friend, so I named the character Renzoku after his "DAoC" character.
Each of my main characters will probably have a little of someone I know. Do you write? How do you make your character names?
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